Teacher and Student Conference 2
Proficiency
In
the second time of conference, our conversation topic started from the
experience with international student. If I own the insufficient knowledge
about the famous trends, popular singers or films and the worldwide culture, I have
no ability to communicate with people and exchange my specific opinion. It is
similar to the writing of essay; if I am scarce of the observation in the
realities of the society, it is impossible for me to write the new insight and
critic of the issue. The professional and formal issue writing shall equip with
the obviously different stances, comments and novel solutions.
My issue paper is
lack of the positive and beneficial ways to solve the problem of abuse in
homeschooling. I shall be familiar with the institute of protection of the
abuse children such as 113 which affiliates to Ministry of Health and Welfare protection
department and the mechanic of the regulations for the homeschooling. It is
necessary to introduce the present lawful procedures of abuse and find out the
new insight to deal with the current deficiency just as olive mentions that “What
is homeschooling's loophole in the laws? What is the solution to this situation?
Should homeschooling being examined more thoroughly?” Besides, Angel suggests
me to take the example of Taiwan, since the different country is in the diverse
system of education and politics; it is not appropriate to give all American
cases for sample.
In addition, the
proficiency of the homeschooling information such as history, statistics, and
application are significant for me to memorize, since people may need to know
the essential background of homeschooling and question the writer’s solutions. Responding
to my peer comments, I will provide regulations or legislation in protection of
homeschooling. The government shall set the institute to investigate the family
regularly. Thanks to the Tony’s advice, he gives the new ways for me to think of
the social workers that communicating through journal or email is a good way
for children to talk about the problem. Another peer comment mentions that the
cases of the abuse may happen not only in homeschooling family but also the
usual family. This makes me rethink furtherly the problem that whether the
abuse in homeschooling has more serious results. Indeed, the children of
homeschooling may get the less chance to call out for help if their parents do
not let them go out. The reader makes me see the different side of the abuse
and the opinion of the opposite argument.
In conclusion,
my essay shall contain the completed information to elaborate the two opposite’s
stances. And I need to be proficient about all data and materials of
homeschooling. The most important thing is that the end of the conclusion shall
convey the new insight to solve the problem. And I will also explain the definition
of homeschooling at the beginning, including the homeschooling name called Non-school
experimental education in Taiwan. It is different from the western countries’ name
of homeschooling and system.
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